Dr. Jamie Bondage

Beth: "You sure you want to mess with me? Most of the guys won't even take me on." I said warily. I really didn't want to hurt anyone. Dummies were ...

Beth: I turned slowly, wanting only my instincts to take over. I didn't feel like being civil at the moment. I glared at the cat in front of instincts were ...

Beth: I didn't really want to leave the solace of my room, but I had no choice. Hunger was getting the better of me. I smiled, amused at myself. At ...

Beth: Being in advanced placement had it's avantages. Most people didn't think that because I was beautiful, I couldn't be smart as well. But, I really didn't care what others ...

Name: Bethany (Beth) Age/grade: 17, junior Gender: Female Race: Wizardess/vampire Apperance: Hazel eyes with long black hair. Pale skin. Extremely beautiful (vampire side). Personality: Outgoing and f

8/10 That's pretty funny! XD

1. the nineteen year old said. Nineteen-year-old That's the only gramatical/structural mistake I saw. There is too much telling. SHe looks like this he did this. We have five senses. ...

Alexus The line was moving fast, everyone axious to fight and win, for glory and honor. I had no idea what I was doing here. I didn't belong. But it ...

Alex: Timidly I waited. I was used to the people at my viliage, but all these strangers scared me stiff. I was a loner and not used to being around ...

Name: Alexus Form: Flying Unicorn Age: 18 Discription/picture: Battle form: Shape shifter form: Special Abilities: Can make herself practically invisible or blend in with her environment. Useful in ba

This is dedicated to my wonderful bf. Verse 1: Only 16, and it feels so right. Wrapped in his arms, he holds you tight. But, how long will this last? ...

1.“Why do you trust me with your secrets?” asked Avalon.. Take out a "." 2. What do with those hands could kill you as well.” This sentence doesn't make sense ...

1.handsomeness Word? 2. but mostly so I no one could see my blushing. Take out the I 3. I blushed again furiously. Comma after again, and take out the ly. ...

PM me...I'll tell you what I know...but I might get a little philisophical on you. XD Sorry, a little passionate about religion. If you don't want my story, I understand. ...

You Will Suffer, hands down. Everyone who has been on here a while will literally tear your piece of work apart. I do it myself...if I can...=p It's very helpful ...